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Title: Dying
Post by: brother on December 06, 2010, 12:51:45 PM
When first I felt my soul release
I did not wanton know
in mystery float my consciousness
in death my flesh below
I cast my sight, a downward glance
to scan the scene beneath
I recognized the clay I shed
now to earth bequethed
then I saw a gathered mass
they, wrecked and mournful weeping,
cursed and cried and prayed and blessed
the one forever sleeping
I willed for those I'd left to know
(in agony they languished)
the womb of God invites me Home
that Death itself is vanquished
Title: Re: Dying
Post by: Eon T McKnight on December 07, 2010, 12:11:23 AM
Bro --

Your words carry the certainty of those that come from the soul.

You speak both to emotions that have possessed me and to visions I hold dear.

Thank you!

Eon
Title: Re: Dying
Post by: brother on December 08, 2010, 12:13:13 PM
thank you Eon.  my brother Cal thinks very highly of you.  thanks for reading!
Title: Re: Dying
Post by: sister on December 08, 2010, 02:56:29 PM
enjoyed much.....  Might have to cut/paste this for my mirror for a while.

sister