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Offline brother

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Dying
« on: December 06, 2010, 12:51:45 PM »
When first I felt my soul release
I did not wanton know
in mystery float my consciousness
in death my flesh below
I cast my sight, a downward glance
to scan the scene beneath
I recognized the clay I shed
now to earth bequethed
then I saw a gathered mass
they, wrecked and mournful weeping,
cursed and cried and prayed and blessed
the one forever sleeping
I willed for those I'd left to know
(in agony they languished)
the womb of God invites me Home
that Death itself is vanquished
There are no answers, only choices

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Re: Dying
« Reply #1 on: December 07, 2010, 12:11:23 AM »
Bro --

Your words carry the certainty of those that come from the soul.

You speak both to emotions that have possessed me and to visions I hold dear.

Thank you!

Eon

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Re: Dying
« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2010, 12:13:13 PM »
thank you Eon.  my brother Cal thinks very highly of you.  thanks for reading!
There are no answers, only choices

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Re: Dying
« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2010, 02:56:29 PM »
enjoyed much.....  Might have to cut/paste this for my mirror for a while.

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life is a bowl of fruit, once clean